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The sky after rain by ~Flora-y-Fauna:iconFlora-y-Fauna:



You remind me of the sky after the rain.
A weak smile, pale skin, honesty.
The humidity rises as you sink next to me,
onto this couch, made of drunken nights.
We cross our legs, cross our fingers.
A draft pushes through the room.
Your hair drifts toward my shoulder, clings to me.
We whisper here,through the noise.
The place full of people, leaning our heads
in close is the only way to hear your words.
So busy playing pieces in this puzzle,
good at being apart of something more,
I forget that you are an enigma.
That in the morning you will disappear.
I come to fear I may be the land, and you,
you may be the sky.
Like clouds after a long rain,
we crawl beneath the covers.
Your skin is like hot pavement.
Your eye lids, like leaves, fall.
We both fear leaving this place,
this bed made of words and smiles.
We fear not seeing each other
more
than we fear falling in love with tonight.
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A love poem for an invisible force.
Love on a Saturday night.

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~ddrfreak573r:iconddrfreak573r: Apr 28, 2008, 6:28:47 PM
god, the imagery!

love it.

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."
~lifeuncommon:iconlifeuncommon: Apr 29, 2008, 3:40:39 AM
I think it's time you got another favourite from me. :+fav:

This is beautiful. I especially love the sense of celebrating the temporary.

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faithhopelove
~Flora-y-Fauna:iconFlora-y-Fauna: Apr 29, 2008, 10:44:14 AM
It is pretty.
thanks :]

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quixotic and chaotic...
questioning and noncommittal...
all the things that you wish you could be.
~Flora-y-Fauna:iconFlora-y-Fauna: Apr 29, 2008, 10:45:41 AM
I love to make the fleeting feel just as honored as the constant.

Thanks for the fav.

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quixotic and chaotic...
questioning and noncommittal...
all the things that you wish you could be.
~lifeuncommon:iconlifeuncommon: May 1, 2008, 6:32:57 AM
You capture that so well.

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faithhopelove